Thread: Whats Ya thoughts on this ? Superman

My mate wrote a song for his mate, it was more a tribute for him as he passed away over 4 yr ago, and they wrote and performed this song about a week after the death.

I've heard it a couple of times and think its real good. The mother of the lad who passed away, listens to it when she feels down as it cheers her no end

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Wow he had some great mates. I watched the Monks one too.
Be nice to be that loved by so many.
What did he die of mate?

He passed away at 27 year old, far too young.

The monks are what they all called themselves because of a table they always sat at in the pub.

He died very unexpectedly from acid reflux or something like that which is very, very rare.

Glad you watched it, he was a really top lad.

I can only ever give my honest thoughts and I just don't like it. It is listenable, but I need to hear my melodies and chord invention and that was very bland and stale. Nothing wrong with it and perhaps meaningful to those involved, but it did nothing to me.

Originally Posted by miles

I can only ever give my honest thoughts and I just don't like it. It is listenable, but I need to hear my melodies and chord invention and that was very bland and stale. Nothing wrong with it and perhaps meaningful to those involved, but it did nothing to me.

Thats fair enough mate, some will like it some wont.

Just good to get feedback, regardless if it's positive or negative

Originally Posted by Mattyhitman

Originally Posted by miles

I can only ever give my honest thoughts and I just don't like it. It is listenable, but I need to hear my melodies and chord invention and that was very bland and stale. Nothing wrong with it and perhaps meaningful to those involved, but it did nothing to me.

Thats fair enough mate, some will like it some wont.

Just good to get feedback, regardless if it's positive or negative

Nothing particularly wrong with it, but just a little too mechanical for me. Just a couple of part timers trying to put a couple of chords together, no harm in that.

Can't help but love song's with true emotion.

This is one that some local school kids did for a little boy in their class that died of cancer