For me there are alot of problems with what you do. First of no one of this guys were some kind of a puncher. If you box that way agains someone who stay at your level on his back leg you are going to eat all day long streight punches and upercuts and you want be able to hit him! When you are on your front leg, as you are all the time, you can throw only this looping right hand with no power in it, if the guy stays in front of you, and if he gets in a little crouch you will have nothing to hit! Second is the jab. You may use it only if the guy is going to his left and after you slip to your left, but if he stays in front of you in the right stance it is better to forget about it. If his head is over his right leg this means outside of your left hand you want be able to land it, or it will be realy easy to pary and counter you and the way that you are launging in, because of your weight positioning, will result in bad news for you.
My point here is that you are fundamentally all wrong... You can´t move, punch with balace and power, you get hit all the time and there is no understanding about the distance because of this. I will recomend to find some one who can explain the basic stuff first befor watching any one!