It's not rocket surgery!

[Ghost]

Filming and editing was good and you act very well,not keen on the script though it isnt fast enough. People in general have short attention spans so you need to get them to laugh very fast right up front or shock them and keep skits short overall unless you can make them laugh with something they couldnt see coming then they'll stay for the next one.

If I wasnt asked to watch this I would of cut out 30 sec into the tennis sketch. Some of the other stuff was ok but too long without laughs.

You do a decent Scottish accent.

Reminded me of some of the early 1980's sketches we had here in Australia.

Ill try and find some for you .


Whats that bridge anyway? looks like a dinosaurs skeleton painted red.

I think they are Scottish!

I appreciate how hard it is too. It's not easy making comedy and having the balls to actually do it needs applauding on its own.

Comedy is easy....


Getting people to laugh is hard.

[Master]

That was good. Liked it. You need a scantly dressed woman in it and it will be perfect.