I quite liked it in a strange Bowie circa 1995 period way. You also seem to be mutating into Brett Anderson. And the eye close ups were very weird Bowie. Good to see you writing again.

I'm doing much the same, but just on an acoustic and traditional structuring. I finished 'The Ballad of Tony Blair' today and sent it in to the Galloway documentary, but its a week late so no expectations. It's perfect for their film though, the lyrics are on the ball.