thanks for the footage. you look good in there considering your both southopaws (which is always strange as youre not used to the way things are done in an orthodox format) but a couple things...
the two of you seem overly emotional in there. a couple things to limit that would be to (i) relax and (ii) stop complicating yourself with all those herky jerky movments. that second part there is honestly one of the biggest sins of all in boxing. theres no, no need to flail all around; remain composed in a stance that allows you punch with leverage - real, leg to leg leverage. from this you are allowed better concentration which therefore allows for better boxing in general.
i have issues with your stance but then again i personally think any fighter who stands square like this is going to be handicapped from it. its so much more difficult to counterpunch the way it is intended to counterpunch in boxing from that stance. but if this is not your way, i would at least reccomend that you learn to better slip punches - which you werent doing there.
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