yeh i agree with the man above.... loose the hand movements etc...lol
need to stop putting yourself down man "this is crap" and "worst ever"
that wasnt shabby... both got some good shots in!!
my advice to you after seeing that is when you box think about these few things and these things only..
stay calm composed and focused look for signs and shoulder movements...
protect yourself at all times elbows in at all times and hands up and down when you see theyr shoulder move before the shot is thrown.. just have hands up then you dont have to worry about getting hit and bieng thrown off your game..
and just commit yourself when you throw and throw good textbook shots... and remember hands right back to the face...
jus keep it simple u know!! remember to be relaxed.. remember to keep you hands up and throw good shots and commit to them ( actually want to hurt the fekker!!)
peace :P