Yep an outside perspective is always good. I've heard that if you proof read one piece of your own writing more than a few times you won't pick up your mistakes after that because your brain just glosses over it. I look foreward to getting your input and Frei's aswell if she doesn't mind spotting it too

I'll be annoyed at myself if I've been reducing my own lung capacity after that effort building up my aerobic fitness just to make it dissappear plus wreck my knee! I have to laugh at the irony though!