Cool Click #4 , I think your doing a great job mate. I would like to see less wasted movement from you. Make the guy miss by stepping off to the side a bit, then be ready to fire and press a bit of your own.!
All that wasted movement is simply taking you way out of range and allowing you sparring mate to simply walk you down,

Instead of trying to get all that distance between you and him make him miss , onlyby an inch or so, this allows you to be able and return fire you will still be in range , this will alsokeep you fresher.

I look forward to seeing your progression, . best of luck .- LG