Ok first off,for your first fight,you did more then fine,you looked pretty good.
Now on to the constructive criticism.
Youve allready caught one yourself,you need to start alot faster then you did.
You dont even try to slip punches,you also never fient coming with your own punches,make them shoulders shimmy a bit more.
Do you notice,you allways,and I do mean allways circle to the left,your making it easy for your opponent to figure out where your going,and to be waiting for you when you get there.
Dont leave the jab hanging out there,you did several times and you paid for it.
Why are you trying to jab away,when you have the shorter range,get in his grill and stay there.

None of this is meant to denigrate a fine first time out of the gate,just hoping to help so you have a better second time out of the gate.