Quote Originally Posted by Taeth View Post
I didn't mean that in a rude way, I just meant that there are things you can do better, but all in all it was pretty good. It always helps to allow your personality to come out in what you are writing as opposed to making it just look likes facts split onto a page. Many people can put clear, articulate paragraphs together, but its the real talented people that have their personality manifested into their work... Just something to think about.
Sweet man thanks. This is exactly what I want. It's my first article so I need to see where I can improve.