Re: I know this may not have to do with boxing but I need your advice
EL GAMO you are correct i feel LIL JOHN ruins the song too. but the irony is he produced it melody and beat wise, so its got that smoothness to it because of him, but yeah his rap is pretty out of place. USHER tha truth dont. hes got some smooooth booty call jams LOL hollaaaaaaaa
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Ok,I have Xmas hols coming up next week,day by day,I'll work on it,see what I can come up with and let you guys know but seriously,I've tried this before and the same stale things keep coming out!! But yep,you're correct Maj,she'll know what I mean,keep up the good work with your stuff but whats with all the violence and stuff? Don't you deal with happy poems?
Sure I do happy poems :) But I love to do poems about the world as it is today and the situations in it, there's very few happy things to write about. Get what I'm saying?
And bilbo, you ever think that El Gamo is doing this out of friendship and NOT because he wants to sleep with her?
Yea bro,I see where you are coming from,you want to make realistic poems,reflections of the world and society today right>? And you're correct,I'm not doing this to sleep with her,hell no! I'm doing it because I care for her and I want show her that through a poem and because she's my best friend!
Thats what I'm talkin about man. ANd just do it from your heart she'll get it.
I like how this whole thread turned in to a poetry corner lol ;D
Maybe more poems one day :) Hopefully. Keep us updated though man.
No offense..but this topic reminds me of people talking in a barbershop about stuff ;D Call this topic Barbershop 3 ;)
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Re: I know this may not have to do with boxing but I need your advice
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I liked this topic :)
Me too bro,when I think of some lines,I'll post it and you can tell me what you think. How do you get your inspiration?>
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I don't really know. Easiest way is to look at the world and say what needs to be said. I don't know, I just think of a topic and write about it and it seems to come out that way :) I guess it comes from your heart.
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Ok,I see what you mean,I'll ok into my heart and write about my best friend.I'll just think of her and see what comes to mind. Any other tips? P.S you wouldn't happen to know where I could buy turtle doves do you?
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Ok,I see what you mean,I'll ok into my heart and write about my best friend.I'll just think of her and see what comes to mind. Any other tips? P.S you wouldn't happen to know where I could buy turtle doves do you?
A Christmas store. So you're intending on using the turtle doves to give to her to mean you'll be friends forever right?
Seem Home Alone 2 lately mister Jetson? ;)
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Just thought I would keep the thread going for the poets of the board.
So Lonesome and Cold
I no longer cry and I no longer worry,
I just sit here alone with nobody to hold.
Embracing the pain of the heartbroken and weary,
a life without love, so lonesome and cold.
As the sorrow sets in, my heart beats so slowly,
with no one to love it just wants to stand still.
A sadness so great, like a rose that is dying,
with dark misery, my soul it does fill.
Such a gloomy young man forlorn of affection,
Who wants nothing more than a soft hand to hold,
To battle the pain of the heartbroken and weary,
and bring joy to this life, so lonesome and cold.
Paul J. 01/15/01
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Thats a good idea :)
Should I make this a poets corner where anyone could write a poetry or talk about life. That would be nice :)
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Just thought I would keep the thread going for the poets of the board.
So Lonesome and Cold
I no longer cry and I no longer worry,
I just sit here alone with nobody to hold.
Embracing the pain of the heartbroken and weary,
a life without love, so lonesome and cold.
As the sorrow sets in, my heart beats so slowly,
with no one to love it just wants to stand still.
A sadness so great, like a rose that is dying,
with dark misery, my soul it does fill.
Such a gloomy young man forlorn of affection,
Who wants nothing more than a soft hand to hold,
To battle the pain of the heartbroken and weary,
and bring joy to this life, so lonesome and cold.
Paul J. 01/15/01
Hold the dice mates ~ Fucking great poem.. you write this brother ? I have not read the rest of the thread, this is the first one , I love poems ! cool clicks are comin round , you too Majesty.. nice thread ! ;)
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There once was a man called X,
Who was always on the lookout for sex.
He went to the shores
and murdered some whores,
and now he's choosing who's next.
your a sick mutherfucker and i love it ! Cool click ! ;D
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Maj,that's some deep stuff there man,sounds like it coming from somwehere deep inside of you!!Boxing Gorilla,dude,that is fricking awesome!! Dudes,I would so so so appreciate it if you could write a poem for me to my best friend who is a girl!! I'll CC you for a long long long time!!!! I've tried writing poems before but I think they turn out really cliched,and boring,the same old thing over and over again!
Hello best friend who is a girl
I'd give you a necklace made of pearl.
One day, I'll try my luck
to tempt you into a buddyfuck.
In some places I'm known as El Gamo
I pretend we are just mates
I'd like to give you el rammo,
It's all in the hands of the fates.
I tried that once, but it didn't quite work out for me - maybe you will have more luck?
LMFAO ! your a Fucking legand ! Cool click again tommorow ! great humor that one !
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Ok,I see what you mean,I'll ok into my heart and write about my best friend.I'll just think of her and see what comes to mind. Any other tips? P.S you wouldn't happen to know where I could buy turtle doves do you?
A Christmas store. So you're intending on using the turtle doves to give to her to mean you'll be friends forever right?
Seem Home Alone 2 lately mister Jetson? ;)
LMAo,yeah it came on the other day!! It's not a tacky idea is it gregory??
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This is a little diddy I wrote a few years back during the NFL season...
It's not very original, I understand. I just wanted to piss of a Giants fan I know.
Eli Manning came to town
riding on his surname
threw another pick or two
got Kurt back in the ball game.
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Originally Posted by BoxingGorilla
This is a little diddy I wrote a few years back during the NFL season...
It's not very original, I understand. I just wanted to piss of a Giants fan I know.
Eli Manning came to town
riding on his surname
threw another pick or two
got Kurt back in the ball game.
;D
