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[El Kabong]

Oi @Greenbeanz you cunt! Rate my painting!!!

[Beanz]

Oi @Greenbeanz you cunt! Rate my painting!!!

There is a lot of anger and unresolved rage in it. The underlying theme seems to allude to firearms and the dispersal of bullets. Where the originals luminosity bathes the viewer in a mood of awestruck reverence your interpretation is more like a vortex of hate, sucking the viewer into a debate. Vincent posed questions to himself, and the viewer, with his work, often seeing himself as if anew, his pointillist brush strokes using colour as an emotional conduit in the service of a feeling. You have taken the blue and pretty much shouted it onto the canvas, scaring the krap out of the pigment and backing it into a retreat that has ended with it spread across the background behind your subject. It is as if you have applied the paint from behind the painting, firing a huge dumdum bullet which has exited leaving a huge wound around his left eye. Without being cruel I would describe it as lacking in finesse. It is indeed bold as a pair of bright chequered golf trousers but I fear a subtler pair of trousers and a smaller stitch would have reduced your handicap somewhat and put you on more of a par with old one ear himself.


Seriously though, I can see where you are going. You have started to introduce a much subtler rendering of light and shade and endowed the portrait with a much more solid shape and sense of perspective. You have done well to recognise the shadow falling over the right eye on the original and have replicated that in your own version but don't forget it falls on that whole side of the face. You want to get some green into the background, his face and jacket. You have sensed this already by applying it to the tip of his nose and under his chin. Start with a smaller brush next and concentrate on a small section. If you have paints at home you can practice with them and experiment with different sides of the brush and ways of applying paint. Without an original painting in front of you it will be hard to replicate the brush strokes but your tutor should help you, but the best way is to go to a gallery or museum and find some work done in a similar impressionistic or even post impressionistic style so that you can draw some inspiration form a true 3 dimensional rendering of visible strokes and use your eyes. Look and look again.

Great work mate. For a novice you show real promise.

[El Kabong]

Thank you. I need to shorten the nose a bit, fix the hat and lapels, and put the eyes in and then its off to start my originals!

[El Kabong]

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Here's the final @Greenbeanz

[Beanz]

It's Cool Lyle. What are you painting next?

[El Kabong]

It's Cool Lyle. What are you painting next?

I don't know, I think I will try to stay with the Van Gogh style though. I might do something normal but make it come to life with the impressionist style

[Andre]

It's Cool Lyle. What are you painting next?

I don't know, I think I will try to stay with the Van Gogh style though. I might do something normal but make it come to life with the impressionist style

How about your first self portrait in that style?

[El Kabong]

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Here's the final @Greenbeanz

@Master here's my very first painting

[Master]

That is good work, that has van gogh and his style.

[El Kabong]

That is good work, that has van gogh and his style.

That was the very first time I put brush to canvas.