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Quote Originally Posted by erics44 View Post
Coz she heard she could get a cock or two
No , you've fucked it up again!!! it's got to be exactly as I wrote it. and it has to be "Cockatoo" because that's the whole fucking joke.


no "Cock or Two" sounds funnier that Cockatoo


and its funnier if she was told to go rather than she went off her own back, know what I mean


so my version suggests her mate told her that there was a cockatoo at the petshop and she took it to mean that there was a few cocks
no "Cock or Two" sounds funnier that Cockatoo
no because there is no such pet as a cock or 2?


and its funnier if she was told to go rather than she went off her own back, know what I mean
no, because then that means her mate knows she's a nympho and you have to build a character for her mate.


so my version suggests her mate told her that there was a cockatoo at the petshop and she took it to mean that there was a few cocks
Yeah I understand that but the way I worded that could mean she'd heard anyway.
trust me , I'm the Comedy meister!!! whereas you're Funny's Brother..............not so Funny!